My Dream Car

My car is orange and black with blue tyres. It has a black and orange front windscreen and bright lights.

My car can speed and drift and it can drive really fast on the roads.

My dream car is special to me because it's new and I'm the only person who would have this car.

By Raniera

We have all been learning how to write a character description. Loni used his plan to help him turn his ideas into sentences. He hopes you enjoy reading his description of Kelly.

Kelly is a teacher aide at Tamaki Primary School. She works in Room 7. She reads funny stories and plays Maths games. Kelly likes helping the children. Kelly has blonde hair. She always has a pony tail. Kelly has blue eyes and a big smile. Kelly looks after me and helps me.

The Christchurch Earthquake

The earthquake is horrible and the people are scared. I feel shocked because some people died and the buildings got damaged. Lots of kind people are helping to rescue the hurt people. I hope Christchurch is alright.

By Loni