Wednesday, March 16, 2011

We have all been learning how to write a character description. Loni used his plan to help him turn his ideas into sentences. He hopes you enjoy reading his description of Kelly.

Kelly is a teacher aide at Tamaki Primary School. She works in Room 7. She reads funny stories and plays Maths games. Kelly likes helping the children. Kelly has blonde hair. She always has a pony tail. Kelly has blue eyes and a big smile. Kelly looks after me and helps me.

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  1. Ms HansellMarch 16, 2011 at 1:45 PM

    Loni, what an accurate description of Kelly. She certainly does have a nice, big smile. I am so glad she helps you. You are doing very well in your learning with Kelly. Ms Hansell

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  2. Kelly Room 7March 16, 2011 at 6:33 PM

    Thank you very much Loni for that wonderful description of me! I am so glad you like my funny stories and our cool maths games!! I am so very, very proud of you Loni of how much you have achieved in your writing over the past few months. Well done you!! Keep going!!

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  3. RKELLYMarch 16, 2011 at 8:09 PM

    Loni, what a great description of Kelly. If I close my eyes and think of your words I can see Kelly!
    From Mrs Kelly

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  4. sialeNovember 8, 2011 at 5:20 PM

    Hi Loni it me Siale I hode you have good day Loni

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