Welcome to my Reflections Blog. This blog is a collection of events, resources, activities and reflections of my work as an Educator in Auckland, New Zealand. These posts are my own thoughts and opinions and are not a direct reflection of my employers.
Loni has written a narrative about his imaginary adventure with an octopus. He has learnt to use connectives to join ideas together. Click the play button to listen to him read his story and see if you can hear the connectives he has used.
Hey Loni what an amazing story you have written about you and the octopus I can't wait until your next one. If you keep going I'm sure you will be a great kid's Author or Illustrator one day.
What a fabulous story Loni! I'm so pleased with the effort you have put into your writing. You are a clever boy using connectives to join your ideas together. Keep up the great work.
Oh Loni - this is fantastic!!! What a great story you have written - full of clever connectives. I am so glad you found your treasure. Maybe you could take Mrs Anderson out with your treasure!!!
Hey Loni what an amazing story you have written about you and the octopus I can't wait until your next one. If you keep going I'm sure you will be a great kid's Author or Illustrator one day.
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Keziah.
What a fabulous story Loni! I'm so pleased with the effort you have put into your writing. You are a clever boy using connectives to join your ideas together. Keep up the great work.
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Oh Loni - this is fantastic!!! What a great story you have written - full of clever connectives. I am so glad you found your treasure. Maybe you could take Mrs Anderson out with your treasure!!!
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